Evaluation On Second Draft

 

Evaluation of my 2nd draft videos

 

I got two of my fourteen year old friends to look at my 2nd draft of my magazine they gave me a list of things they like, dislike and think need to be improved.

 

 

 

I also got two of my 12 year old friends to evaluate the 2nd draft of 'DoYa' agian they said they liked the magazine and they listed them things and then the things they think alos need to be improved.

Second Draft

 

What have I learnt so far

I am really enjoying my media course, I think the whole subject has taught me the importance of planning and designing. I am more aware of faults in my own work now and less afraid to point them out.
Learning to use programs like inDesign and Photoshop have been a real eye opener because I need a boost in my ICT skills to get on to what I want to do after education.
I am also studying photography and so using Photoshop there too has meant that it is easier for me to apply knowledge across subjects, even with software clashes.

Check List Of Things That Need To Be Changed Before I Hand In Second Draft

• fill space on front cover
• Add 'I' infront of know on editors letter to read 'I Know'
• New picture of emma
• another tori jay logo for the front
• edit maddi's caption on the contents page- dont make too much sense at the moment
• get some pictures of maddi to put on double page spread.