Appealing To My Target Audience

Appealing to my target audience from vcongram

In What Ways does your media product use, develop or challenge conventions of real media products

Comparing 'DoYa' to other magazines already on the market from vcongram

Final Product- Double Page & Article

Final Product- Cover & Contents Page

 

 

 

 

 

 

Work In Progress

This is a screen shot of my working on my front page, I am going to make a new 'Tori-Jay' logo. as i think the one i have at the moment is a bit irrelevant.

More Changes

I have made the most changes to my contents page, I have virtually redone it.
I thought the numbers where hard to link to the articles so I have changed that so it now reads 'page 16' rather than just '16'. I have added two more articles and more into 'regulars' so my magazine looks more full to the brim. I made all the logos myself from photos I have using for my photography Alevel course. I made the lightning bold on PowerPoint same as the wedge logo I made it from the basic shape drawing tool.
As well as this I have made another logo for my fake 'Tori-Jay' company because the one I had before was a bit blury. I edited this one on Photoshop by changing the complete style of Maddi's hair and the colours so it is hardly noticeable it is her.

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After;

 

 

 

Changes To Front Cover

I made some changes to my front cover but there was error in printing it so i will update my blog with a picture of that next week.

Changes That I Have Made

Since watching the videos and reading my feedback i have made final changes and I am happy that all changes that i thought needed making have been made.

 

Contents Page;

 

I haven't made many drastic changes to the contents page I have just rewritten the editor's letter fixed grammatical and spelling errors and repositioned it and changed the colour to fit the colour scheme.

 

Double Page Spread (page 1):

 

I also rewrote the introduction to my interview and changed the colour of the 'ultimate diva Maddi Clarke' I also took the picture from the bottom left and repositioned it on the other page o think it is better this way round as it makes the text easier to look at and less like a story and more like and interview. Only thing I am not happy with is the fact that the green and orange are a bit of block colour not a 'glow' but i think this is down to the printing and scanning process.

 

 

Double Page Spread (page 2):

 

I made some major changes on this page. I put the interview into coloums I think this way it looks better and easier to read. Also with a few pictures i think it looks more authentic. Also by putting a pull quote at the top, adds intrest and makes the reader want to read full article. Also I changed, as I said I would, the title of this I think it is bettter in these colours.  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



 

Assesment Of Second Draft

 

 

 

 

I got 2s 'in awareness of text variety' and 'accuratly using language to regester'.

I am going to retype the article to make it look less like a story and put it into columns so i can incorporate more appropriate language.

I said that I am going to change the header on the top of the second page of my double page spread.