Changes That I Have Made

Since watching the videos and reading my feedback i have made final changes and I am happy that all changes that i thought needed making have been made.

 

Contents Page;

 

I haven't made many drastic changes to the contents page I have just rewritten the editor's letter fixed grammatical and spelling errors and repositioned it and changed the colour to fit the colour scheme.

 

Double Page Spread (page 1):

 

I also rewrote the introduction to my interview and changed the colour of the 'ultimate diva Maddi Clarke' I also took the picture from the bottom left and repositioned it on the other page o think it is better this way round as it makes the text easier to look at and less like a story and more like and interview. Only thing I am not happy with is the fact that the green and orange are a bit of block colour not a 'glow' but i think this is down to the printing and scanning process.

 

 

Double Page Spread (page 2):

 

I made some major changes on this page. I put the interview into coloums I think this way it looks better and easier to read. Also with a few pictures i think it looks more authentic. Also by putting a pull quote at the top, adds intrest and makes the reader want to read full article. Also I changed, as I said I would, the title of this I think it is bettter in these colours.